Saturday, May 30, 2015

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As soon as I was discovered by Sir Edison & then turned ON,
A new era in human civilization was born.

I started my journey as a stupendous being,
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Addy T 31 May 2015

Upon first sight I thought this was going to be another corny piece of poetry. But I actually thoroughly enjoyed it, it was quite a well thought out piece with a surprisingly meaningful premise. You did quite a good job.

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Abhishek Singh 31 May 2015

Thanks Advaith....

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Abhishek Singh 30 May 2015

Happy that you liked it......Thanks a lot for your encouraging words kelly

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Kelly Kurt 30 May 2015

A wonderful poem, Abhishek. Very creative, intelligent and insightful. Thanks for sharing

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