Thursday, July 6, 2017

Light And The Dust Comments

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When the light appeared
it said,
My Creator!
You created me as an invisible radiation
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Dr Dillip K Swain 01 February 2018

A very powerful little poem! The photograph appended is alluring! ....................Full marks

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Savita Tyagi 12 July 2017

Very profound and thoughtful write. always a pleasure to read your poem.

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Nosheen Irfan 07 July 2017

Beautiful. A very profound write. Contrast brings out the worth of everything. Nothing is worthless.10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 July 2017

Creator has created light as an invisible radiation and this amazes mind entirely. Dust is another wonder creation that helps light making visible to us. The beam becomes glittering gold while this light falls on dust. Dust shines by touch of light. This is very deep and thoughtful philosophical poem shared here...10

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