Wednesday, November 7, 2018

Light And Shadow Comments

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Walk high above on the clouds
Watch the shadow on the ground

Souls of animates and inanimates
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Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair
sea
COMMENTS
Dr Antony Theodore 22 January 2019

light and shadow, sun, skies, sea, lightning......... so many ideas put together to present your theme of light and shadow. thank u my dear Parameswaran.. you are really walking high on the clouds. thank u. tony

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Thanks a lot for the appraisal, dear tony

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Edward Kofi Louis 30 December 2018

Rise up to the top of the sea! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Thank you brother for the wishing comment

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Devi Krishnakumar 16 November 2018

A beautifully written poem.

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Thank you Devi for the good comment

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Valsa George 12 November 2018

'Rise up to the top of the sea It may take births to reach the surface'................. The rise may be slow, but the effort is what matters. Without continuous effort, nothing can be gained. A beautifully composed meaningful poem.

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Thank you Smt. Valsa George. The merger of Jeevatma with the Paramatma is not so easy. It needs a lot of efforts throughout several births together

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 November 2018

Light and shadow have important play in life. Both are complimentary. You have inscribed astutely about shadow. and escape. Beautiful poem.

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Thank you Kumaramaniji. As you said, shadow cannot be seperated like the soul

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