Saturday, May 13, 2023

Light And Darkness Comments

Rating: 3.9

When too many negative thoughts cloud my mind
When darkness seems to torture and torment
When I can not see a road ahead
When heart becomes gloomy with unbearable pains
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Bharati Nayak
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Today Bharati published a new poem. And this poem has vanished from the list Best Poems of Members, suddenly. This has happened to a score of my poems, a score of times. PoemHunter continues its mischief

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" I am the light residing in your heart "…. Superb revelation. This poem ranks #11 today. Congratulations Bharati

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The ultimate guide in darkness is definitely the light that comes from the soul. To know it is called realisation. It's a semi spiritual poem. Hearty congratulations for kts ranking

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Today at #12. Bravo. Congratulations! Stay blessed, Bharati.

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Such positivity can only emanate from a heart that is strong and bright! I am proud of you, Bharati.

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Light and darkness are both right here, within our heart…. In the darkness, Oh! Omnipotent, please help us to light a tiny lamp of positivity! "

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Today this profound poem ranks #13. Congratulations, Bharati

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" Disregard the snubs and jeers " good counsel. But easily said than done.

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" Disregard the snubs and jeers " good advice, but easily said than done…

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#18 today..

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And a more brilliant exhortation " Dispel your negative thoughts Step with confidence". Yes Uddharet Aatman Aatmanam…", as does Gita say…

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An extraordinary invocation " You are the power, believe it! "….

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Bri Edwards 04 June 2023

a favorite line for me: 'Stick to truth and do good' And these words are nice: 'You can easily clear the thorny bush And make a way for yourself As well as for others.', BUT 'easily' is, I think, a dream, not a reality sometimes.

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Bri Edwards 04 June 2023

5 stars. Bharati, when I can not see a road ahead I try to pull over and take a nap till the fog clears, literal or figurative fog. Having ice cream can help.also. bri ;)

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"…. …. heart becomes gloomy with unbearable pains I scramble like a blind man….." this disturbing image is the right preamble for the ensuing lines…. Bharati is a poet par excellence

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This is really a most brilliant writing.Deserves all the adulation.

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A poem that exudes extraordinary love for humanity

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" Disregard the snubs and jeers / Stick to truth and do good " Satyam vada, dharmam charah… This poem has moved to position #18. Congratulations Bharati

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"Make way for yourself/as well as for others "… marvellous…

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Very evocative poem. Encore, Bharati

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When darkness shouts at you from everywhere, " Do not search for light outside Find it in yourself "… very good, Bharati. Bravo

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