When too many negative thoughts cloud my mind
When darkness seems to torture and torment
When I can not see a road ahead
When heart becomes gloomy with unbearable pains
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" I am the light residing in your heart "…. Superb revelation. This poem ranks #11 today. Congratulations Bharati
The ultimate guide in darkness is definitely the light that comes from the soul. To know it is called realisation. It's a semi spiritual poem. Hearty congratulations for kts ranking
Today at #12. Bravo. Congratulations! Stay blessed, Bharati.
Such positivity can only emanate from a heart that is strong and bright! I am proud of you, Bharati.
Light and darkness are both right here, within our heart…. In the darkness, Oh! Omnipotent, please help us to light a tiny lamp of positivity! "
Today this profound poem ranks #13. Congratulations, Bharati
" Disregard the snubs and jeers " good counsel. But easily said than done.
" Disregard the snubs and jeers " good advice, but easily said than done…
And a more brilliant exhortation " Dispel your negative thoughts Step with confidence". Yes Uddharet Aatman Aatmanam…", as does Gita say…
An extraordinary invocation " You are the power, believe it! "….
a favorite line for me: 'Stick to truth and do good' And these words are nice: 'You can easily clear the thorny bush And make a way for yourself As well as for others.', BUT 'easily' is, I think, a dream, not a reality sometimes.
5 stars. Bharati, when I can not see a road ahead I try to pull over and take a nap till the fog clears, literal or figurative fog. Having ice cream can help.also. bri ;)
"…. …. heart becomes gloomy with unbearable pains I scramble like a blind man….." this disturbing image is the right preamble for the ensuing lines…. Bharati is a poet par excellence
This is really a most brilliant writing.Deserves all the adulation.
A poem that exudes extraordinary love for humanity
" Disregard the snubs and jeers / Stick to truth and do good " Satyam vada, dharmam charah… This poem has moved to position #18. Congratulations Bharati
"Make way for yourself/as well as for others "… marvellous…
When darkness shouts at you from everywhere, " Do not search for light outside Find it in yourself "… very good, Bharati. Bravo
Today Bharati published a new poem. And this poem has vanished from the list Best Poems of Members, suddenly. This has happened to a score of my poems, a score of times. PoemHunter continues its mischief