Sunday, August 9, 2020

Light And Darkness Comments

Rating: 5.0

When you heart is torn in two,
I'll find you and make you new.
When your soul is wearing thin.
I gently whisper you shall win.
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Shaun Cronick
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Shaun Cronick 10 August 2020

Typo's now removed and rewritten slightly for a better beat and flow.

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Dominic Windram 10 August 2020

Terrific poem Shaun...I love your deployment of personification throughout. It's a totally positive ten from me!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 August 2020

The execution and presentation are just fantastic. Another poetic gem , Shaun. Every stanza stands out To my Poem List.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 August 2020

Wow, what a wonderful poem. Two contrasting sides; light and darkness. So beautifully crafted and depicted. Powerful lines that have been extracted from a brilliant and versatile mind. A very engaging write.

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