Light And Darkness Comments
I love to muse on the fading sunlight in the sky.
Before the golden sun on the Western horizon
Turns crimson, I move to my Southern window
And stand aside, gazing at the green tree tops.
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The fall of dusk is beautifully portrayed! The home bound green parrots merging with the green leaves...... the image is striking!
Thank you @Valsa George, for the kind appreciation. Much inspired by your kind words.
I like how you painted a picture of nature and its relation to how you might leave it is so serene and i think all of us wants to leave that way
Thank you Nadia, for appreciating the poem and for sharing your own thoughts on leaving this mundane world. Much appreciate your kind words.
I admired the divine touches in this impressive poem sir! How u write of twilight and muse is poetically beautiful! Kudos and nice to read u again.
@S.zaynab Kamoonpuri, Thanks for these beautiful words in the very first comment. Your admiration and appreciation will remain a source of inspiration for me to write better poems on nature, of which I too am an ardent admirer and a mused onlooker.
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7/27/2025 8:45:45 AM # 1.0.0
A great comparison between the birds and humans.Truly here lies the essence of life
Thank you for reading my poem and leaving a kind comment here, @Abdulrazak Aralimatti.