As you wait for the light from heaven
The smoke from the mouthless children they spoke
With our time passing by the string that hold
Father hear your broken and hopeless son
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'Letters I created for you to exist No perfect words nor choice'. the lines most attractive in a beautiful write...the rigid stone...a perfect analogy...to the crying mind as we well as to the ears listening not, atop...congrats, Loe...i give you ten...
lovely write of hope..great write..keep up your good work... Ency Bearis
beautiful poem I loved it, I hope you keep on writing coz you are truly gifted.
Very moving. I like this one. Reminds me of someone passing away.
go get those seeds would be change for the better. very lovely poem. thanks for sharing.md