Tuesday, August 19, 2008

Light Across The Blue Sea Comments

Rating: 5.0

As you wait for the light from heaven
The smoke from the mouthless children they spoke
With our time passing by the string that hold
Father hear your broken and hopeless son
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Louemile Escober
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Manonton Dalan 25 September 2008

go get those seeds would be change for the better. very lovely poem. thanks for sharing.md

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Cheung Shun Sang 24 August 2008

Very nice it is good and mysterisy

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Kesav Easwaran 23 August 2008

'Letters I created for you to exist No perfect words nor choice'. the lines most attractive in a beautiful write...the rigid stone...a perfect analogy...to the crying mind as we well as to the ears listening not, atop...congrats, Loe...i give you ten...

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Ency Bearis 22 August 2008

lovely write of hope..great write..keep up your good work... Ency Bearis

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Grace Mutandi 21 August 2008

beautiful poem I loved it, I hope you keep on writing coz you are truly gifted.

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John Nightingale 19 August 2008

Very moving. I like this one. Reminds me of someone passing away.

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