Saturday, January 9, 2021

Light A Candle Comments

Rating: 5.0

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the night has fallen
and the moon has hidden behind dark clouds
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Susan Williams
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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 July 2022

The concept of ghosts portrayed in this poem makes it wonderfully wonderful

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Dr Dillip K Swain 08 July 2021

A splendid little poem that sparkles....top score

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Susan Williams 15 August 2022

your comments are always so fresh and lievly and I wish I could comment on yours but sadly there is no box provided

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Rebecca Navarre 23 February 2021

An awesome write! .. Definitely 5 Stars! ..++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 23 February 2021

Beautifully Beautifully moving heart and soul! .. With Roberta Flack, candle light, gray and gloomy skies, you paint the mood! ..

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Susan Williams 15 August 2022

what a lovely comment! ! !

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Sylvia Frances Chan 17 January 2021

Most beautiful poem, amazingly conveyed, dear Susan, my poet friend in the USA. Thank you so much for the enjoyment this mesmerizing poem has given to me.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 17 January 2021

My comment comes now in pieces, hihi, but I never give up! To my favourites and I have enjoyed line after line, word after word. I love your poems, Susan!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 17 January 2021

I THOUGHT this loveliest poem you created is The Member Poem Of The Day, since it is so finest to the ears, I hope that will be a POD one day, 5 Stars for you, dear Susan

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Sylvia Frances Chan 17 January 2021

I WAS giving your magnificent poem a comment, BUT all of a sudden that disappeared. Once again I tried, but your poem was not in sight anymore, and I already know the new PH how to use that, but those 'surprising' moments by PH, how I dislike that!

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Richard Wlodarski 13 January 2021

Just like the song, your poem takes me into a special place in my mind and heart. Absolutely stunning!

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M Asim Nehal 13 January 2021

The mystic behind this wonderful poem takes back to glorious moments to relive and cherish. The known face reappearing and resurfacing under candlelight is a true flasback. Nothing less than 5**

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Keith Brown 11 January 2021

Very nice write, grief and all the what if's, well painted

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Susan Williams 12 January 2021

Oh! That brief comment packed a lot of welcome critique! ! ! Thank you so very much for a well-directed exam of its mechanics!

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Susan Williams 12 January 2021

oh, dear, I; ve tapped on your name 3 times and PH won't take me to your wall--I hoped you were a member--I shall try again

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M.J. Lemon 11 January 2021

Magnificent, Susan. I see a break up, the lonliness and isolation that follow, and then the resulting wishful thinking. Such an amazing verse. A perfect 10.

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Susan Williams 12 January 2021

MJ-- my eye is having a fit---so this comment hay be stiff and

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Susan Williams 12 January 2021

well PH flipped my reply into the ozone where it will find plenty of its brothers and sisters

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Susan Williams 12 January 2021

two cpmments flipped into ozone layer by PH

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Susan Williams 12 January 2021

SO here comes replies in pieces

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Susan Williams 12 January 2021

because I don't have time or patience with this advertising technique

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Susan Williams 12 January 2021

did it again---one more comment flipped into ozopne layer to join its brothers and sisters

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Susan Williams 12 January 2021

i tied for a short story in verse form but perhaps this is more a sketch?

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Susan Williams 12 January 2021

thank you for your kind words and 5 star rating, MJ

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Susan Williams 13 January 2021

I wanted to reply last night but my eye bothered me so bad I gave up.

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Susan Williams 13 January 2021

But I figured a way to get back to my poem to respond tonight! As you see from poem, I be good at wishful thinking! ! ! Thank you for your encouraging words, my friend. Feeling pretty marginalized by PH these days but I still have my good friends here!

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kyvin nash 11 January 2021

Beautiful piece Susan, very deep...I sense the poet's loneliness and despair, I feel a strong connection with this poem 10/10

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Susan Williams 12 January 2021

Thank you for this cpmment---it means I have accomplished my mission to hear that a reader feels a strong connection to its words! ! thank you, thank you, thank you for the top rating!

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me poet yeps poet 10 January 2021

This is beautiful poemy Ilove to light candles daily

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Susan Williams 12 January 2021

Thank you Mr. Yeps! I hope you have a storage room of candles then! ! ! !

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David Wood 10 January 2021

beautifully crafted poem, so refreshing.

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Susan Williams 12 January 2021

thank you very much for your kind comment---put a smile on my face!

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Unnikrishnan E S 09 January 2021

"The First Time Ever I Saw Your Face". lifting you to a trance. So enchanting poem, Susie. All the five stars, and a trillion more! Onto MyPoemList

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Susan Williams 12 January 2021

Yes! ! ! ! ! ! An accolade from you is so encouraging, my friend! ! ! And thank you for the 5 star rating! ! ! What would PH do without you? ? ? Flounder.

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Unnikrishnan E S 09 January 2021

Part 2. The all pervasive effect of music on human life is wonderfully and picturesquely depicted. Nothing more to be said when you mention Roberta Flak and her "The First Time Ever I Sat

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Susan Williams 12 January 2021

Wasn't it just the perfect marriage between voice and lyric? ? ? ! ! ! Again thank you for your helpful comments

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Unnikrishnan E S 09 January 2021

Wow! What a poem, Susie. Such gems make our time on PoemHunter worth the while. "I listen to her over and over again/ lost in the memories of silk and satin "". More than reason to light a candle, once again, and wait. Wait... Wonderful! ! From the picture of gloomy evening

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Susan Williams 12 January 2021

Thank you so much for your in-depth look into my poetry--you always stir me to strive harder, to delve deeper, I cannot thank you enough for your kindnesses!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 09 January 2021

A marvelous poem... critically appreciated!

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Susan Williams 12 January 2021

Thank you so very much! ! !

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Dr Dillip K Swain 09 January 2021

This is a great poem like your top ones. I don't know why my heart prompts me not to read and write! However, I thought of reading reading some good poems like this one in my spare time.

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Susan Williams 12 January 2021

I am pleased that you chose to read one of mine then, Dr Swain

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