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Crystal waters the flow and ebb...
The roll roll roll of a stone so dead
the Butterfly flown into a Spidersweb
the corrupted one once so white and pure
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Rich in rhythim with a flow that is fantastic. Well done.
nice rhyme, the nature story within the poem's also sweet.. good job..
Nice creation Like a crystal clear cascade fell down from clean black rock i can hear the soft beautiful sound, Very good devotion to nature, Thanks for sharing.
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7/27/2025 4:53:26 PM # 1.0.0
Liked the ending. The innocent should be saved from the clutches of the evil. Lovely write.