Sunday, April 9, 2006

“light” Comments

Rating: 5.0

Light-Light ever bright
Flood my every pore
Banish the black of night
From my very core
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Ray Lucero
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Patti Masterman 01 February 2009

This is a charmer, and I love the last line which sort of ties the whole together.

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Lucianne Fasolo 30 September 2007

Charming piece! I love it, :)

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Raveendran . 12 June 2007

A nice piece. Blest be the one who is able to share this happiness.

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Moya Levy 10 April 2006

Great Ray, I feel I am filling with light. There are no dark places within me now. Lovely poem, Moyaxx

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Duncan Wyllie 09 April 2006

A prayer of healing contained in this beautiful write, you have so much to share with the reader, thankyou for this wonderful poem, Love Duncan

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Patricia Gale 09 April 2006

A wonderful thing the light. Brings us out of the darkness. Patricia Gale

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