Light... Poem by Rebecca Navarre

Light...

Rating: 5.0


On a dance in the wind. Heard the
sweetest sounds sing... Lifting up
my heart, over miles apart, over
oceans wide, across the skies... So
harmonic like... Standing out under
the stars on a cold cold night. When
suddenly a warm breeze comes along
and wraps around..So gentle, and light,
whispering it's alright...

Wednesday, November 22, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: comforting,gratitude,life,light,loving ,nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 03 March 2022

Brilliantly expressed...loved your light

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 November 2017

An exuberant poem executed touchingly.Thanks for sharing.

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Rebecca Navarre 30 November 2017

Thank You! ! ! Kumarmani, For Such A Kind And Thoughtful Reply! ! ! ! ! Your Poetry Ever So Spiritually Flows! ! ! ! ! With Such Beauty And Insight! ! ! ! ! That Touches Heart And Soul! ! ! ! ! Thank You Again Ever So Much! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! And Smiles! ! ! ! !

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Unnikrishnan E S 22 November 2017

Hi Becca, Lovely poem. On the comfort of love. Beautifully expressed. Loved reading the poem. The lines: : : a warm breeze comes along : : and wraps around..So gentle, and light, : : whispering it's alright...: : are indicative of sensual pleasures as well. A 100+++

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Rebecca Navarre 24 November 2017

Thank You! ! ! Unnikrishnan, For Such A Beautifully Kind Reply! ! ! ! ! Your Poetry Is So Powerfully Painted With Such Descriptive Beauty! ! ! ! ! It Captures The Readers Hearts And Minds! ! ! ! ! Hanging On Each And Every Word And Line! ! ! ! ! :) Thank You Again Ever So Much! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! And Smiles! ! ! ! !

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