Light Comments

I read it once as a poem, and again as a song after reading your notes. I enjoyed both greatly. The words flow well.

From the moment I started reading the first LIGHT poem I knew I was hearing a song! So I wasn't surprised to find that confirmed in your POET'S NOTES. The simplicity of the language, repetition of key lines, (dare I dream) , and focus on just one intense emotion are all elements which make up song lyrics. We don't want reflections slowing things down! We want a primal experience and your poem delivers that intensity. I'd like to hear this set to the music you would create out of it.