Friday, March 28, 2014

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The first morning ray
Broke the walls
of my aphotic heart
with the sweetest chatter
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Ruma Chaudhuri
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Khairul Ahsan 16 March 2015

Very nicely you have described a dawn breaking sun spreading its rays to the world heralding a new day. The poem is marvelous and romantic. In the first stanza, 'misty dreamworld' is a beautiful expression.

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Akhtar Jawad 01 May 2014

I am not aware of a poet who did not love Morning. This is a lovely poem from a lovely poetess.

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Ruma Chaudhuri

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