Monday, January 9, 2012

Light Comments

Rating: 4.7

When the lamp is shattered
The ethereal light lies in shed;
When the dreams are scattered
The spirit of beautitude lies dead.
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Deep Mukherjee
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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 March 2019

The spirit of beatitude grows much faster when it gets touch of light and overcomes darkness with courage and dignity. This poem has deeper insight and greater values. A nice poem is excellently penned.10

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Nitijita Mishra 06 July 2012

I am just short of words 2 praise this one...thumbs up :)

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~Deana ~ Dotterweich 02 February 2012

This one is also well written. :)

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Deep Mukherjee 17 January 2012

thank you; i would certainly like to keep it up! ! ! ! !

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Poet Of The River 17 January 2012

Good one here! I like the way it is put together. keep up the good work, i look forward to reading more of your work.

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Deep Mukherjee 16 January 2012

@Krystal, at some period of life, most of us go through this feeling! ! ! ! isn't it? ?

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Krystal Vincent 15 January 2012

i undderstand this completely i went thru this same simmular thing just a week ago....

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Deep Mukherjee 15 January 2012

Thank you very much; this poem just came out of random thoughts and optimism :)

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Vijay Sai R 15 January 2012

scintillating piece...well done

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Deep Mukherjee 12 January 2012

Thank you; i will try my level best to keep it up......

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Deep Mukherjee 11 January 2012

Thank you very much...........@Samantha

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Samantha Turner 10 January 2012

Your poem is really amazing =^.^= Keep up the good work, and thank you for reading mine to!

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Alicia Meyers 10 January 2012

That is such a wonderful poem. (: 10/10: D

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Deep Mukherjee 10 January 2012

Thanks everybody for reading this; i am obliged.........

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Bikramjit Dutta 09 January 2012

True happiness comes from the joy of deeds well done, the zest of creating things new! Kudos 2 u For This Outstanding Wordings.

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Deep Mukherjee 09 January 2012

Thank you Dave; and yes it will be my pleasure to read your poem.....

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Dave Walker 09 January 2012

A really great poem, really like it. May i invite you to read my new poem calledz A Window Of Time 3.

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