When the lamp is shattered
The ethereal light lies in shed;
When the dreams are scattered
The spirit of beautitude lies dead.
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Good one here! I like the way it is put together. keep up the good work, i look forward to reading more of your work.
@Krystal, at some period of life, most of us go through this feeling! ! ! ! isn't it? ?
i undderstand this completely i went thru this same simmular thing just a week ago....
Thank you very much; this poem just came out of random thoughts and optimism :)
Your poem is really amazing =^.^= Keep up the good work, and thank you for reading mine to!
True happiness comes from the joy of deeds well done, the zest of creating things new! Kudos 2 u For This Outstanding Wordings.
Thank you Dave; and yes it will be my pleasure to read your poem.....
A really great poem, really like it. May i invite you to read my new poem calledz A Window Of Time 3.
The spirit of beatitude grows much faster when it gets touch of light and overcomes darkness with courage and dignity. This poem has deeper insight and greater values. A nice poem is excellently penned.10