Thursday, March 2, 2006

Lifes Re-Cycle Comments

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Your fluorescence reflects through the stars at night.
Rings of regret as I think back to that sad night.
I wanted you.
I needed you.
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Deborah Ashdown
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James-dean Bradfield 02 March 2006

Cheer up, what's wrong with you, express yourself by crying privately. Not writing yp bring everyone doen. Get out you emo. Thats right get out.

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Sylvia Chidi 02 March 2006

A very nice heartfelt loving poem. Yes Life itself is an endless cycle. Nice poem

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David Darbyshire 02 March 2006

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH Deb's what a sad poem darling, I want to cry......but very nice read darling, hope your well love from Dave big warm HUG xxxxx

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