Monday, November 2, 2009

Lifes Pressures Comments

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so many tears i cry
and no one to dry my eyes.

so much pain that i go through
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louis rams
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Christine Kerr 14 November 2009

Reminds me of a story I heard way back of someone digging a hole to move their house over for a basement. The kid believed it could never happen but the kindly father convinced him that it would take no time at all. Through patience and just communicating with each other the kid was surprised as to how much they had accompliushed once he turned around. Life I find is excatly like that. Some can take it in stride and others have no patience what so ever. A good lesson I believe can always teach an old dog new tricks or a young dog patience.

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 05 November 2009

a very meaningful and useful poem...will help the reader solve his problem...10

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Matt Mooney 03 November 2009

The golden rule is 'one day at a time'.10.

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Kranthi Pothineni 03 November 2009

Meaningful write. Keep posting.

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amen to the millionth millionth power.

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Dick Badian 02 November 2009

keep the faith lois.just keep the faith

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