Tuesday, November 22, 2022

Life's Only One Road Trip, I've Chosen Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

I feel you crumbling in my arms
like a porcelain heart down
to the girth you fell so hard.
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Amanda Shelton
COMMENTS
Chinedu Dike 02 February 2023

Really a poignant rendition from the heart. Congrats on your poem's selection as member POD.

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Amanda Shelton 12 February 2023

Thank you very much.

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Rob Lamberton 02 February 2023

Thank you for sharing your painful experiences in the hope of helping others! Well expressed! !

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Melancholy poem. Sadness grips my heart as I read through. And congratulations to you dear poet. This poem is the POD Members today. Well done.

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Jim McGill 02 February 2023

Excellent poem. In my experience, people like this don't realize how good something was until they have lost it. Beware! This clown will try to: "make up for ‘everything' I've (he has) done"

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Bharati Nayak 02 February 2023

You said it boldly and you inspire others to come out of abusive relationship....'Life's only one road trip, I've chosen me. No narcissist is going to control me.'

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 02 February 2023

Life's too short to keep running from the beast. ~superbly written about life; nice to read; congrats for being selected the poem as POD

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Mac Che 02 February 2023

Life's only one road trip, I've chosen me. No narcissist is going to control me. //BEAUTIFUL

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Sylvia Frances Chan 02 February 2023

The date you wrote/ submitted this heart-touching poem is my BirthDAY. As information for you. How are you NOW going? I hope you feel better each day, seven years treated cruelly, how saddest!

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Jim McGill 02 February 2023

Thank you Sylvia for pointing out this poem to me. My complements to Amanda Shelton for excellent work.

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Amanda Shelton 12 February 2023

I am doing okay. Counseling is helping me. Thank you so much for the support.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 02 February 2023

CONGRATULASTIONS dear Amanda, your very sad but amazing poem is chosen by PoemHunter and Team as The Member Poem Of The Day. Most deserving, Top Score and myriad more

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Amanda Shelton 12 February 2023

I am surprised. I wasn't aware until now. Thank you.

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David Wood 22 November 2022

Such heart felt feelings so vividly expressed, my time heal your open wounds and mend your heart as not all men are the same. Stay strong.

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Amanda Shelton 04 January 2023

Thank you so much. I am building my life again. I started counseling. I needed the extra support.

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Amanda Shelton

Amanda Shelton

Bakersfield California USA
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