I feel you crumbling in my arms
like a porcelain heart down
to the girth you fell so hard.
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Thank you for sharing your painful experiences in the hope of helping others! Well expressed! !
Melancholy poem. Sadness grips my heart as I read through. And congratulations to you dear poet. This poem is the POD Members today. Well done.
Excellent poem. In my experience, people like this don't realize how good something was until they have lost it. Beware! This clown will try to: "make up for ‘everything' I've (he has) done"
You said it boldly and you inspire others to come out of abusive relationship....'Life's only one road trip, I've chosen me. No narcissist is going to control me.'
Life's too short to keep running from the beast. ~superbly written about life; nice to read; congrats for being selected the poem as POD
Life's only one road trip, I've chosen me. No narcissist is going to control me. //BEAUTIFUL
The date you wrote/ submitted this heart-touching poem is my BirthDAY. As information for you. How are you NOW going? I hope you feel better each day, seven years treated cruelly, how saddest!
Thank you Sylvia for pointing out this poem to me. My complements to Amanda Shelton for excellent work.
I am doing okay. Counseling is helping me. Thank you so much for the support.
CONGRATULASTIONS dear Amanda, your very sad but amazing poem is chosen by PoemHunter and Team as The Member Poem Of The Day. Most deserving, Top Score and myriad more
Such heart felt feelings so vividly expressed, my time heal your open wounds and mend your heart as not all men are the same. Stay strong.
Thank you so much. I am building my life again. I started counseling. I needed the extra support.
Really a poignant rendition from the heart. Congrats on your poem's selection as member POD.
Thank you very much.