Friday, February 16, 2007

Lifes Little Moments Comments

Rating: 5.0

Some of lifes little moments catch your heart
And from these moments you don't want to part
That moment for me was when I met you
And now there is nothing I can do
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Bonnie B Long
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Geoff Warden 27 February 2007

I truly like the flow of this write, like a gentle easterly breeze, the wording is so delicatly laced to intise the readers sences....Well done

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Howard Johnson 16 February 2007

Nice love poem, filled with emotion and rhymes, Each stanza is creative and full of feeling.

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Bonnie B Long

Bonnie B Long

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