The holidays have been a time of looking at my life.
It makes me wonder how I'm doing as a mother and a wife.
I hope I am successful in this most important task.
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I'm always trying Mary, but I suppose you can't teach on old Dog (Bitch in my case) new tricks. Nice write indeed. Keep improving, although you nice enough now. Love Ernestine XXX
I really enjoyed reading this. The last line is so true, staying positive about what you are doing is important. I felt your words. Looking at your work helps my writing, Thank you. Kindest Regards Slim. x.
the problem is when we stop thinking there is room for improvement mary :) nice one
Welcome back Mary with a very nice poem! It's called growth, and it works better without the negativity, as you say. Warmly Ray
Poetic wisdom. Yep! It always hits you as the year is drawing to a close. You start by looking back over the past year, and before you know it, you're in infant school. Lovely piece Mary as always. love Denis Joe XXXXXX
You're a positive force, Mary, and I am proud of you! !