Life's Flawed Mirror Comments

We need better vision.

Last stanza enchanting to read and very thought provoking Sir.

Very well written and realistic work that truly states our social flaws in a very clear and excellent way..

A powerful, insightful and incisive poem. Great thoughts to ponder about. I concur with the last stanza and these social ills must be checked and abhorred for the betterment of all. A well thought out poem.

An insightful analysis of the overwhelming problems of our society. The world is flawed in a sense because we have an ideal of what it should be however, ideals do not marry well to reality

(continuation from comment below) . At the same time I hope we can actively contribute to the kindness and wisdom revolution that will get us out of the chaos created by greedy politicians and corporate figures

A very good and thought provoking poem. I believe that the future generations will need what we go through now as a through lesson on how not to do many things, ... contd.

......against the wrong wall....significant....