Friday, June 25, 2021

Life's Cycle V Exit Lounge Comments

Rating: 5.0

Life seems to hesitate
here to wait to contemplate
in this huge spacious hall
there's room, time for all.
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Adrian Flett
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Beautiful poem Adrian.......5 stars

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A tender poem of care and concern for the next generation. May the angels watch over them.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 26 June 2021

5 Stars Full for this impressive poem full of mealncholy. How precisely created, thought and posted. Valuable 6 stanzas full of beautiful end rhymes.Be sure, dear Poet, no one goes through the Exit Lounge, surely not! . To my Favourites!

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