This is more a message spoken than a poem. I think the message is the fovcus and it should be. This means though, that something is lacking in the worded presentation. I'm not sure what it is, but I thought the full meaning was not quite there for the listener. I gave it a 7.
GW62
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This is more a message spoken than a poem. I think the message is the fovcus and it should be. This means though, that something is lacking in the worded presentation. I'm not sure what it is, but I thought the full meaning was not quite there for the listener. I gave it a 7. GW62