Saturday, May 10, 2008

Lifes Breath Comments

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i take a deep breath
and dive in head first
but i didnt see the rocks
or the current
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Kali Drainville
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Theresa Moore 10 May 2008

This is an outstanding and lovely poem. Remarkably moving… Thank you

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Theresa Moore 10 May 2008

This is an outstanding and lovely poem. Remarkably moving… Thank you

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Stone Granite 10 May 2008

Very nice poem Kali.

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