Thursday, September 11, 2008

Lifelong Regrets Comments

Rating: 2.6

All the time I waited for you
All the night I spent thinking
All those hearts I drew
As my heart was slowly sinking
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Tanvi Damle 04 December 2008

it's srsly gr8.....i realli luvd it :)

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we all have life long regrets but to express it takes lots of emotions I understand completely 10/10

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Bob Blackwell 23 September 2008

Very good rhyming, and a very good poem

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Aijaz Asif 19 September 2008

you are very good at rhymes and transforming them into words, the whole poem isvery good specialy these lines i lked most... The teardrops on the paper The ink running down the page Love was my escape But now I feel trapped within a cage...beautiful very beautiful, in few lines feelings and emotions has been told or may be im wrong, good write keep writing

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Greenwolfe 1962 11 September 2008

This is a complicated situation to write about but I thought the writer did as well as possible. That is why I recommend it. Though some may need to read it more than once. GW62

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