Monday, July 24, 2006

Lifeline Comments

Rating: 5.0

hold me, wrap me up all tight
squeeze the sadness from my eyes
these eyes, these eyes, cries and cries
hold me through the shadowed night
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gina prettybrowneyes
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Josephine Adrian 23 October 2006

sheild me from my thoughts inside lurking, hiding, the back of my mind My favorite lines. Sounds like me. Great poem!

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Kyle Jones 30 September 2006

Ah! GINA! I'll hold you! This poem is phonominal! Well Done! _Love Kyle

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Pia Andersson 31 July 2006

Oh Gina, this is so well written...you should be very proud of this poem This poem touched me deeply -Pia

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