Lifeless Survivor Comments

Love poetry that depicts a part of history. Good blend of literature and history. Thank you for your comments on my poem, Holding A Pen. Appreciate it very much. Yes, I always listen to music and write. I think in pictures, so it's easy to depict what I see fully. Music transports me, as I listen to it, I hear the words and write. It's like interpreting a foreign language, kind of, the music is the language.

So the violin remains a lifeless survivor! But it brings to mind the sad tale of a glorious vessel which was supposed to triumph over wind and wave but was cruelly dashed by an iceberg not long before it set sail, drowning the dreams of hundreds of men and women! Great write!

Interesting narration...well-penned!

Very nice. It really touches the heart and one is compelled to bring those last moments to the inward eyes and feel for those hundreds. Fabulous

Hello Yasmeen i presume you are writing about the Titanic. This is a wonderful poem so well written I enjoyed reading well done to you