Monday, January 25, 2010

Lifeless Memories Comments

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You made me feel like Im on the edge of that mountain waitin to take that fall
I cant find that desire
to even admire the love that we use to share
It was you and me plus the sun- it was shining
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I'm loving everything about this poem. From the title to your last line, and all of the imagery in between. Izzey Strange

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Kudakwashe Roak Mutama 10 March 2010

'Lifeless memories' the title itself appeals to our sense of imagination... it shows that these memories do not mean anything to the writer. i'm still to know why it is your favourite poem? ? ?

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