Wednesday, December 2, 2009

Lifeless Life, But With My Love It's Peaceful. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Why is life so pointless, so dull, so dead,
life is like sand nothing to do when your sand,
you get stepped on,
and you are hated by many.
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sarah bishop
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Sylvia Frances Chan 30 October 2018

ADDITION: Oh, the vote! A 10 and myriad 10's for the Vote here.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 30 October 2018

Most touching poem about the human senses personified. The last stanza is sublimest. Thank you so much for sharing in 2009 and now in 2018 I just discovered you, since PH has many difficult ways to arrive, and at last....By the way have you become a cartoonist now? Next to creating poems, I am a cartoonist too. An autodidact cartoonist. Thank you for sharing this touching poem.

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