Tuesday, March 5, 2013

Lifeless Life Comments

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Lifeless Life

A heavenly floret issued from its abode
murmuring prayers, sighs from lips flowed
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Yasmin Khan
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Shahzia Batool 07 April 2013

The first reading reminded me of Blake's images...composed in such a refined symbolism that the poets notes guided me to the roots of the imagery...n now i can feel the empathy n onenness of the poet with her that rendered life as lifeless...

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Valerie Dohren 02 April 2013

Very moving and poignant - a sad loss.

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Hazel Durham 09 March 2013

Caressed with such delicacy with an everlasting bond of love for a beautiful soul!

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Gajanan Mishra 05 March 2013

sweet soul- divine birds. thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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