Tuesday, May 24, 2011

Lifejackets Comments

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Some days I feel I'm drowning
sinking way down low.
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Elaine Macfarlane
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Marketa Richnavska 17 April 2014

amazingy written, you have a great talent, I love rhyming, I love the theme, I love the whole poem so so much, it's really beautiful...keep it up, you are strong :)

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Mark Dillon 06 April 2014

I've been there, great lines. Please read Times or When darkness calls, great writing, thanks.

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Jayne Davies 06 April 2013

Well written! Well done to you x

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Elaine Macfarlane

Elaine Macfarlane

East Kilbride, Scotland
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