Saturday, September 12, 2015

Lifecycle (Tanka) Comments

Rating: 5.0

The new buds of May
Bathes in the suns warm embrace
Drinks the early dew
Matures in the summer sun
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David Wood
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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 13 September 2015

Another beauty about buds bathing in the sun. Congratulations on your 400th poem. Keep going.

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Miraj Raha 12 September 2015

perfect description of a Life cycle, I was connected to the poem right from drinking the dew to fading.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 September 2015

Wonderful Tanka with wise imagery where new buds are of having bath with sun's rays. Wise sharing....10

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