Saturday, December 2, 2017

Lifeboat Comments

Rating: 5.0

How do measure the ache of a heart?
Liters, pounds, light-years?

All useless.
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Seamus O' Brian
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Glen Kappy 09 December 2017

Hey, Neal! First, it’s good to see a new posting from you, and I hope in the process it’s helped at least some lttle bit. There’s much in it. On this second reading I most identify with the last two lines as I say of myself, with an attempt at humor, that I’m an equal-opportunity offender. Generally I don’t mean to hurt but... I find lyrical—a lifetime of living rubbled inside. And once again I delight in your verbs. Peace. Glen

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tom billsborough 03 December 2017

This is top quality and very moving indeed, Seamus. My recent separations have been caused by deaths but the feelings you express I can identify with. This will go into my list of favourites.

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Seamus O' Brian

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