Wednesday, February 1, 2017

Lifebends Comments

Rating: 5.0

You're still an icon of unique beauty.
We were friends even as our life bends,
Living in different places seeing new faces,
We still held the bond of a special place.
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Hazel Durham
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Chaminda Pushpadewa 09 November 2018

dear poet, this is a great poem because friendship is great connection in the world, we have to share ideas, feeling as well as live together thanks so i would like to invite will be reading my poem also thanks

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bri edwards 17 October 2018

(cont.) and more: To Treacy's pub it's light beckoning us to it's fire burning with peat, To warm our character and to hear the jokes an eternal treat. BUT the 2nd and i think the 1st it's should be its, the possessive form of the pronoun it, which, unlike Hazel's does/should NOT include an apostrophe! ;) very nice! to MyPoemList. bri :)

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bri edwards 17 October 2018

The Heath House blending regally into it's ancient landscape..County Kildare? but: its, not it's. Thanks for Poet's Notes. i 'love' the alliteration sizzling sausages, and..the rest of stanza 3/ a favorite line: But life bends in different directions, oh, it does! ! ! (cont.)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 December 2017

We are friends and we are living in different places but still we face each other and feel far across the globe. We have special poetic bond here. A bond of friendship is definitely special. Friendship carries trust. An excellent poem is beautifully penned...10

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Dimitrios Galanis 14 March 2017

A true elegy to a lost before the expected time human soul deserved to be loved A beautiful tribute, like a painting we would like to hang on the wall.

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Chinedu Dike 12 February 2017

Absolutely awesome! Piece of great elegance with rendition of words to utmost justice. Lovely eulogy spiritually brought forth from deep recesses of the heart with a never-ending love. Exquisite, Hazel. Thanks for sharing. May your future be greater than your past and present would let you dream of.

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Sekharan Pookkat 11 February 2017

a beautiful poem on friendship add my ten too

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Unwritten Soul 08 February 2017

Wow, you hit it at the right center of great button..beautiful work, loved it

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Valsa George 02 February 2017

Memories come rushing in, taking us back to good old times! Each time such memories resurrect in us we are transported back to that clime and time! Reading this, I can very well imagine what a beautiful time you had together! A great tribute to your friend whose memory you still treasure though both of you had to part ways!

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Susan Williams 01 February 2017

What a loving and warm tribute to a friend and good times shared in a very scenic place. Well-chosen words, Hazel, I could see you two at that pub

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