Saturday, May 19, 2018

Life Would Be Boring If You Weren't Dead Comments

Rating: 5.0

If you awakened drenched in sweat on a cold morning
Shivering paralyzing cursing knowing you're dying
Would you step barefoot on the cold dark concrete floor
Looking for an exit from a sleazy back door?
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Richard Wlodarski
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Carl Roussell 20 May 2018

Seems like it can be difficult to see and live life the way you would like. Really good poem. A 10.

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So very true, Carl. And thank God for the faculty of imagination! Thank you for believing it to be a really good poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 May 2018

This poem expresses amazing fantasy. You have brilliantly and expression skill. This poem is excellently penned...10

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Sometimes, fantasy is needed to move away from the really serious themes. Great stress buster! Kumarmani, thank you so much for your great response!

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