The moment you left me,
Could you remember?
When I held your hand for the last time;
I can still feel,
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no one is an island..as they say..so life without that someone is lonely, as i can see tear drops from your eyes..oh, what a lovely and divine masterpiece you have here. Your words are just lovely.. Hugs, Meggie
Wow! What a divine love poem, even though it is unrequited 'I am still trapped in that tear drop'. The image of the hand also perfect. Excellent. Top marks Karin Anderson
Ooough...Touch my heart warmly, Doc! If the girl in ur poem was me, I must b the owner of love paradise who filled by ur lovely words that always keep me peace in affections..
i'm humbled at the turn of phrtase-'trapped in that tear drop' tender hands/on the barren soil of my dead skin' to name a few! great work of art, doc!