Sunday, April 5, 2009

Life Without You Comments

Rating: 5.0

The moment you left me,
Could you remember?
When I held your hand for the last time;
I can still feel,
...
Read full text

Dr Kamran Haider Bukhari
COMMENTS
Indira Babbellapati 13 April 2009

i'm humbled at the turn of phrtase-'trapped in that tear drop' tender hands/on the barren soil of my dead skin' to name a few! great work of art, doc!

0 0 Reply
Meggie Gultiano 12 April 2009

no one is an island..as they say..so life without that someone is lonely, as i can see tear drops from your eyes..oh, what a lovely and divine masterpiece you have here. Your words are just lovely.. Hugs, Meggie

0 0 Reply

Wow! What a divine love poem, even though it is unrequited 'I am still trapped in that tear drop'. The image of the hand also perfect. Excellent. Top marks Karin Anderson

0 0 Reply
Riya Riska 10 April 2009

Ooough...Touch my heart warmly, Doc! If the girl in ur poem was me, I must b the owner of love paradise who filled by ur lovely words that always keep me peace in affections..

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success