Thursday, January 15, 2009

Life Without You Comments

Rating: 5.0

Since you left this world all
that I have done is hold your
picture close to me afraid to
let go. You're all that I can
...
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Jacob Courtney
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Joseph Poewhit 16 January 2009

Has some deep feelings in the words.

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Fred Omorogbe 15 January 2009

Great expression with words, could feel the emotions. Really nice poem. *** edit the typo 'your' (used twice) ... Should be 'you're'.

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Fiona Davidson 15 January 2009

Beautiful heartfelt words, , , you have written this so well...thank you...Fi

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Jacob Courtney

Jacob Courtney

Nashville TN
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