Enjoyed your poem, it has a very good message explaining concepts of love and not love. At times it got a little confusing because of the repetition of some of the words, possibly consolidating them would make things a little clearer. Other than that it is a very good poem and I like it very much. An interesting and unique concept you have painted of love and not love, etc. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn
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Enjoyed your poem, it has a very good message explaining concepts of love and not love. At times it got a little confusing because of the repetition of some of the words, possibly consolidating them would make things a little clearer. Other than that it is a very good poem and I like it very much. An interesting and unique concept you have painted of love and not love, etc. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn
Dear Roseann, Thank you very much for your comments. I did some changes and sent you a message. Appreciate if you can comment.