Tuesday, September 8, 2015

Life Without Love Comments

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Life without love:

There is water in the pond but actually not water
There are plants around but actually not real plants
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Ranil Gunawardena
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Roseann Shawiak 08 September 2015

Enjoyed your poem, it has a very good message explaining concepts of love and not love. At times it got a little confusing because of the repetition of some of the words, possibly consolidating them would make things a little clearer. Other than that it is a very good poem and I like it very much. An interesting and unique concept you have painted of love and not love, etc. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Ranil Gunawardena 08 September 2015

Dear Roseann, Thank you very much for your comments. I did some changes and sent you a message. Appreciate if you can comment.

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