Life is always light
for some
Life is always fight
for some,
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Wonderful poem. Life is all that it can be. Who is to say if it molds us to what it wants us to be or gets molded with one's will or perseverance or so e thing even beyond that.
You have dwelt on all aspects of life with a verve and reflected on the entire types of lives and the end question- Who is there to say what is life? captures the heart! No wonder this poem has been selected as a Member poem ! Congrats!
Who is there to say what is life? Nice question posed at the end. Ruminations on life.
In this moment life is like you say here in this lovely poem, however, my idea is, that everybody brings out the law for the other. Ones one understand this, life become light and easy, because life is a School room where we all get lessons. If we solve the problems what we create in reality, comes the next one, because until we are here on this earth we just have to learn and learn. You painted the perfect picture of humanity in this moment.
Great job! But dispite our greatest attempt, life is beyond description. Thanks for bringing us this wonderful piece.
Ramadas, your poem is very beautiful, it speaks of life in so many ways, with every breath we take we inhale the good and the bad and that's life. Thank you for your amazing poem! I love Rumi too, very much.
Life is nothing but life which leaves ones own signature behind the mankind for the future generation
Nice poem as it talks about the eternal truth! I enjoyed reading this poem..
Wonderful poem... And that's a really good question