Sunday, December 3, 2006

Life Was A Crying Game Comments

Rating: 5.0

For too long
I've lived amongst the wicked and evil
Those selfish prides
And egotistical ways
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suzan gumush
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Not a member No 4 04 March 2007

Susan, can you lop that extra stuff off the end of 'immediately' for me please. My fingers are out of control this morning. Took me two shots to get this bit right! Is it right? Cheers, jim.

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 16 December 2006

Quite a quandried situation...Vivid imagework delivers your story so well... Smooth fluxing structure...Sokid crafting, Suzan fjr

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George P. Stasiuk 03 December 2006

Conflict (armed & otherwiise) comes across hard - fine write - got me somewhere between Bosnia and Northern Ireland. I felt the pain and saw the surroundings, Whew! ! Thanks.and keep 'em coming. George

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