Thursday, March 15, 2018

Life Unfolds In Spring Comments

Rating: 5.0

The sunlight,
Softly removes the blanket of snow
To awaken earth from winter's sleep
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Bipasha Dutt
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Dr Dillip K Swain 24 December 2022

A playful butterfly and a bubbly bee Greets the jubilant flower with great enthusiasm....lovely expression. Wish you Merry Christmas and Happy New Year 2023.

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Chinedu Dike 27 May 2019

A creative, beautiful, and compelling work of art. You are very talented, Bipasha. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Unnikrishnan E S 14 April 2018

Hi Bipasha, If you look from the point of science, flower is a devise of the plant/ tree to pasgs on its genes to the next generation. But it is not so. Flower has a life of its own. From the state of a cocooned bud, she provides immense pleasure to the eyes of the perceivers. And the fragrance. Keeps a treasure of nectar for her guests. No wonder, for She is the offspring of the goddess of spring. Not just that! She gives up her life to provide a more delicious fruit to All.

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Kostas Lagos 27 March 2018

Beautiful poem! It sure made my day! Thanks!

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Bipasha D 29 March 2018

Thanks a lot Kostas ! !

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Chan Mongol 24 March 2018

What a beautiful penning! Very thoughtful. Thanks for sharing. +++++10

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Bipasha D 29 March 2018

Thanks a lot Chan

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Anil Kumar Panda 17 March 2018

Soothing and refreshing like the morning breeze. That is what your poem is. Loved its simplicity and clarity. Such a beautiful drop on nature.10+++

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Bipasha D 17 March 2018

Thank you Anilji ! !

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Savita Tyagi 17 March 2018

Beautiful and enchanting words like fresh breeze of spring. Such lovely impressions are created with this poem. Loved it.

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Bipasha D 17 March 2018

Thank you Ma'am ! !

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Dr Dillip K Swain 16 March 2018

A sweet poem! I liked, 'the mild breeze gently cajoles the cocooned bud'! I like the way the poem is structured! You have provided specific elements in each stanza to appease your readers! Enjoyed reading it!

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