Life - Two-Fold Comments

nice poem...keep on :)

Awesome Poem! Great work!

This was a great poem! I really liked it!

A really great poem, like it.

A great poem indeed.: D

A great poem..... Really liked it

Are you fatalistic in such a young age? Or is this the way you take the things? Or your sharp intellect force you to look the things in them deeper? Flames are symbol of hope and wings are symbol of freedom, these are established through out the world, but you want to destroy these by your power of anti-reason…..other wise the poem has its quality of good flow and nice wordings… the tone and texture of the poem is very fantastic, the weaving of the poem is a fine fabric of marvelous art I am giving you 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

nice wording... good poem! ! ! Rose))))))