Friday, May 13, 2016

Life Troubles - Fate Comments

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Why was i born?
If i was torn,
Was it on purpose?
to make me just a corpus,
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Mysterious Writer 333 13 May 2016

Excellent. Truly beautiful yet so sad. Great job.

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Dr Antony Theodore 13 May 2016

I'm in need of something to cling, If you're kind, Then I don't mind, Let me hold your hand and feel free, As you yourself write at the end, some mysterious force is to come and lift me up from this state....... believe, pray to Almighty God...... God will send some human beings who is kind to lift u up. it is my experience and the experience of many...... thank you dear poet for this beautiful poem . here you are an important person and poet in Poem hunter. tony

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