Saturday, December 16, 2006

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All Them Kids Crying
People Defying
Each Other
Kids Lying to Thier Mothers
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I M Swan 25 January 2007

WOW Girl. Such depth. Will be reading more of your poems. Patty

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Jim Foulk 16 December 2006

you do have it together for a 14 year. it is to bad that some of your peers thought the same. that is good advice in the poem. do not give up trying it is a very good poem, you should write more, there is hope. there is always tomorrow, is a poem i wrote, look it up and please read it, thank you, and good luck.

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