Sunday, December 29, 2019

Life, The Way You Look Comments

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Despite an opportune wide open door,
Hither comes a man defeated in mind,
Unsure underdog, tail tucked unto hind,
His life drifting unto a hellish shore,
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Edward Kofi Louis 05 January 2020

A sure shot! ! Life! The way you look at it; Advantages against the odds. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Aniruddha Pathak 06 January 2020

Advantage followed by an ace, and the game is yours, whilst the other guy thinks of another deuce.

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Valsa George 03 January 2020

Attitude is much more important than opportunities. Some fail to see the wide door lying open before them, while some others with confidence, break the closed door open. Such people will surely have their way. The way to success depends more on the effort one takes. Great message and a beautiful poem.

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Aniruddha Pathak 03 January 2020

Your analysis of the poem is always to the point with a point or two to note. Thanks for the comments.

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