Thursday, April 11, 2019

Life Sucks Comments

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Every day I wake up
And hear this strange sucking noise, like
A clogged vacuum cleaner.
In my house, when I step outdoors,
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Clyde King
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Chinedu Dike 21 November 2020

Well expressed thoughts and feelings. A poignant bit of verse. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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HB Rita 11 April 2019

A nameless stranger sticks Out a hand or a rope or a stick, And you grab hold with all your life. Problem is, you get tired, weak, And lose hope in ever getting out. That's when life really does SUCK! .................. very true. We rely on others, we depends on other when we are hopless, we try to lean on someone but not necessarily we can rest with peace on others. Meaningful poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Clyde King 11 July 2019

Thanks Rita. It’s how I feel sometimes and I think it’s pretty universal. Happiness finds you when you don’t look for it; when it does, rejoice in it. Needless to say, all of us suffer at times and there is always someone who’s worse off than we are.

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Chuy Amante 11 April 2019

with suckage all around we can cry or play i worry about the alternative, at least i'm here today!

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Clyde King 11 July 2019

I’m glad you are. Hang on tight. In spite of our problems we march on.

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Naveed Akram 11 April 2019

I cannot see what the meaning is, but it is invariably about how life sucks, or how you succumb to it.

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Clyde King 11 April 2019

Does life have meaning?

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