Life Struggle Comments
My trudge and my toil
Copious rivulets my pores wept
The weakening of wheels
That drag my choice-less mass
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Your poem describes the struggles, toil and trials of life so well. It makes one feel what it means to be overburdened. Thanks for sharing.
Thanks dear Evelyn for your encouraging comment. Sorry for the belated reply.
Copious rivulets my pores wept The weakening of wheels That drag my choice-less mass.....magnificent poetic expression! A beautiful poem.......10++++++ That beckons death as rest
Hustle and bustle along the line! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Daily life activities to make ends meet. Sorry for the late reply
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What a deep and soul searching verse. Hi Kingsley! God showe his blessings upon you this day. 10+ Panagiota Romios xx