Life Struggle Poem by Kingsley Egbukole

Life Struggle

Rating: 5.0


My trudge and my toil
Copious rivulets my pores wept
The weakening of wheels
That drag my choice-less mass

My trudge and my toil
Hot perspiration of my lungs
The failing of breath
That wills my wheels to stop

My trudge, my toil
Zeal of life to live
The hopelessness of hope
That beckons death as rest

My trudge, my toil
Not enough for victory song?
How much chance is left?
For hope about to flee

(Saturday 7th August,1999,12.27am

Tuesday, August 6, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: struggle
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem was written when I was passing through a difficult period in my life.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Panagiota Romios 25 April 2020

What a deep and soul searching verse. Hi Kingsley! God showe his blessings upon you this day. 10+ Panagiota Romios xx

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 03 December 2019

Your poem describes the struggles, toil and trials of life so well. It makes one feel what it means to be overburdened. Thanks for sharing.

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Kingsley Egbukole 18 January 2020

Thanks dear Evelyn for your encouraging comment. Sorry for the belated reply.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 03 December 2019

Copious rivulets my pores wept The weakening of wheels That drag my choice-less mass.....magnificent poetic expression! A beautiful poem.......10++++++ That beckons death as rest

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Edward Kofi Louis 26 October 2019

Hustle and bustle along the line! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kingsley Egbukole 18 January 2020

Daily life activities to make ends meet. Sorry for the late reply

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