Friday, April 27, 2012

Life Struck Comments

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As down the stair tripped Christabel
Christabel she tripped and fell.

Her thought being set on death and birth
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Derek ThomasRymer
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Ging Taping 04 September 2014

Made me smile mood change from grumpy to happy....

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Paul Brookes 22 December 2013

Poor Christabel shouldn't laugh at her fall but has me gigging 10/10 BB Thanks for making my Sunday Morning

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 21 December 2013

Yor surname rhymer too. Perhaps u hav got frm it to rhyme n flow yor poems well. Dis was such a clever fun poem. Kudos. Nice to read u again

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Derek ThomasRymer

Derek ThomasRymer

Coventry UK
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