Thursday, August 27, 2009

Life Story Comments

Rating: 5.0

I was just indecent kid
Trying to grab a handful lesson
Taught to hold on good deeds
Longing to look for nod of approval
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Niken Kusuma Wardani
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Nooruddeen Mm 22 November 2009

Wonderful and wise presentation Congratulations Rgds Nooruddeen

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Chitra - 28 August 2009

profound...well described!

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Hanna Sara 28 August 2009

great.. simply original.10

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Ency Bearis 28 August 2009

good self - contemplation and presented well...nice write....10

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Surya . 28 August 2009

wonderful poem.powerful expression.nice composition too, . voted10 for u surya

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rago rago 28 August 2009

a good write and wisely presented..........

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Kee Thampi 28 August 2009

Learn the best way to erase people face Fight with my own desperate fantasy Cut the stream of tears before it get dry we love to work and love to get a hush from this World

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