Life Stories Have No Rhyme **** Comments

poems does not have to rhyme....even sometimes the rhyme impairs the message in the poem.........so it's not a must to rhyme the poem....this is better without rhyme......just keep focusing and develop your skills because you are talented....write your pen off! ! =)

to me that life sounds like it rhymes very much. everything the way on imagines it to be, sad in a way that it acctually rhymes so much.

a nice concept. simple and touching. shan

Yes, this is the cycle of the life, , , But there's no any problem that your poem doesn't rhyme.. :) keep it up...Merna